uh this story was freaking hot. i love when an author goes beyond the standard sex acts and really getting into intricate dirty deeds. it makes the sex feel so much more realistic. Lauren is an older woman having a long distance internet/text relationship with Marc, a younger guy who works on a cruise shop. they finally meet and have super duper hot sex. the writing is excellent and Fox taps into legit fears and hesitations when it comes to meeting someone who you might have built up in your head. im definitely going to read her other shorts and probably bug her to write something longer. :)