This story started off better than the first installment then quickly slid into Nopesville. The heroine is basically kidnapped and threatened with death if she tries to leave the hero. There's no emotional development, just a lot of telling so for the reader this comes off as unexplained Stockholm syndrome instead of submission. There are no scenes of brainwashing, she just agrees to insane requests because it makes her so hot. Again this would be fine if you understood why she was so effected by this man, but you never see the emotional side develop. The bulk of the sex is standard, blow jobs and intercourse, but there is two kinky sex scenes instead of one. If you're looking for more bondage and SM it's not here.